Thursday, 2 November 2017

100 word challenge week #8

One day I went to circus o la and saw someone who can swallow a burning flame! He celebrated when finished eating the hot fire. After that I went to the pool and had to talk to someone about it to go swimming I told a white lie to get in. Not to long after I was caught and had to go to prison for a long day. As they took me in I thought to myself why in the world would they take me in for a lie? Tomorrow I guess I would find out. About 23 hours later they took me home. At home I was getting extremely grounded for reasons unknown                                                                                                                                                                                  End
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  1. HillcrestBlog35 November 2017 at 13:44

    Hello ,
    The prompt words are fairly well spread out in your writing. The events in your story don't really fit together. You would benefit from word processing your story in a 'Word' document first, then copying and pasting it into your blog. 'Word' will help you realize where you have made spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors. Congratulations on completing the 100 Word Challenge Week #8.
    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Van

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