Thursday, 26 October 2017

100 Word Challenge Week #7

I came home from school one day as normal but for some reason there were claw marks on the walls and my cat was missing. Then I heard noise from upstairs so I slowly went to investigate. I found more markings and some paintings were knocked down. When I was investigating I saw my bedroom door slightly open I crawled over to the door and opened it and as I slinked into the room next to my bed I saw something sitting in the shadows on it. I got up and was mauled my kittysaurous! As the door slammed, I knew I was toast.
Posted by at

1 comment:

  1. HillcrestBlog331 October 2017 at 09:45

    Hello Bettercarpet,
    This is an interesting interpretation of the prompt. It is creepy! You have used some descriptive vocabulary e.g. 'investigate' and 'slinked'. Try to add even more interesting words next time. Remember not to repeat words in a short piece of writing like this e.g. 'open(ed)' and 'investigate(ing)'. Well done on completing Week #7 of the 100 Word Challenge.
    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Van

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)