Wednesday, 29 November 2017

100 Word Challenge Week#12

One day I thought I would make myself a sandwich but when I went to my fridge there was some animal in it. It jumped out and hurried around being delirious and very energetic. This creature was ruining my house I had to stop it I thought to myself. In a instant I clambered up the stairs almost tripping, I was grabbing my phone to take a picture of this atrabilious beast. Scampering down the stairs I was about to take to photo but my battery died so I tried everything I could to get this evil-smelling white creature out of my house but then it lunged at me.

1 comment:

  1. star: Great job using interesting words.
    star: Good job varying sentence lengths.
    wish: I wish it was a little more clear as to what was going on in your writing.

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